Good thread. The community as a whole looks setup and decent, however, I think you have the wrong mindset about a HL2RP server. (Along with several grammical errors in your advertisement, which happen I suppose.)
"The HL2RP server originate for a person named BrockDawg". along with "So far he/I". When writing anything, you choose a perspective, and stick to it, not half-confused third/first. Also, it "originate for a person named BrockDawg" I'm assuming you meant "originate from". Not only these, but there are several things that don't make sense, or make you look extremely unproffesional. (If the owner can't use proper grammar or writing, how would I, as a player, want to join the server with- not to be mean but... someone who can't roleplay properly? In fact, I could just join another HL2RP server with an owner who can properly use grammar, and presents his community in a more serious manner.) What I mean with the un-serious tone is stuff like this: "The Combine Synth Elite Soldier is
probably some descendant..." or "...our rules of lulwebuling..."
Grammical issues aside, there is only real problem I think you have- which is the wrong mindset (as mentioned above) this is hinted at the fact that you were chosen to create the server "and get it populated", as if that was the only goal in creating your server. (To get it populated and thus possibly receive donations for a profit.)
Upon going on your website I see this:
Which to be honest does not really give me the impression of being a serious server. (If I didn't see HL2RP in the title, I would thought it'd been DarkRP.)
My advice:
In things like your announcements or threads, try to put more effort into a giving a more professional and serious tone. Along with this- be confident with things like your rules or lore. It's your server, and since most of HL2RP is up for interpretation, you can bend the lore a bit (or a lot) to your needs & liking (as long as it's a logical inference, or reasonable, etc.) There shouldn't be a "maybe this is lore idk lol". The next thing that might help is changing your goals from: "Getting more players!!!!!!" to "Receiving some good roleplayers, even if small, to have some fun." Quality over Quantity is a large phrase of advice given out when first starting HL2RP servers.
ALL of that aside... I really like your logo.
Good luck!
Click to expand...