I made a fucking logo for my up-to-come Schema

Look at this piece of art. Cry in it's (Shittiness) beauty.

 

too explosive

http://boards.4chan.org/gd/

 

Things to take note of:
-Too much drop shadow
-Too many fonts used
-Some areas of the font can't be seen because of matching colours.

On a different note, I look forward to seeing a STALKER RP, I really enjoy that game.

 

Red- Can't read
Green- To close to the title

 

Overdone, hard to read, too many fonts

 

Its a eye fuck and a mind fuck. Waaaaaaaaaaay too much going on in it also you dont need like 1337 fonts. Just 1 simple font that makes it look nice.

 

Like everyone else said.. I just went and looked at it... my eyes hurt even more than they did before... Course its not as bad as joining as server that has a loading screen that literally "Rapes" your eye balls... Black and Red, melded together as checkerboards, to the point where it LOOKS like one of those pictures where you stare at it long enough your mind thinks it starts to move when in reality it is not moving but instead inside your mind. Font needs to be changed to one thing and not all over the place.

 

I heard all your cries as your eyes burn at my beautiful image. I know. xD

Its horrid :'(

 

wtf is this

 

A logo for his up-to-come schema @[email protected]

 

That isn't how you make a schema logo.



This is a good example because its simple and shows off a bit of the theme (font with lightbulbs, etc).
Note: I'm not necessarily saying I like the image (what the fuck is that green/red dot bullshit), but just get to the god-damn point in your image.

Here's my take, done in 2 minutes:

(used imgur's gray background to show the white text)

http://i.imgur.com/m7ad31n.png


Protip: Don't clutter it.

 

You can also take a look at mine.

First join:


After join (this it what's showed when you join each time after your first join):

 

My point is 'wtf is this' isn't the proper way to post


Why didn't you just post what you just did, that is 10x more constructive then your first post

 

Doesn't really matter now, does it? Both posts got my point across, the first was a reaction and the second was a solution.