Xenocle | Half-Life 2 Roleplay

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Welcome. Welcome to Xenocle.

You have chosen, or been chosen, to relocate to one of our finest remaining CW: HL2RP servers. I thought so much of Xenocle that I elected to establish my Administration here, in the community so thoughtfully provided by Clockwork. I have been proud to call Xenocle my home. And so, whether you are here to play, or passing through on your way to parts unknown, welcome to Xenocle. It's safer here.

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Xenocle is a Garry's Mod roleplaying community. Xenocle was founded in November, 2014. The timezone we operate in is eastern united states timezone. We currently support one gamemode, Clockwork: Half-Life 2 Roleplay. I believe in good staff, and that shouldn't be a problem as I only pick the best. I want custom plugins to be implemented, I am learning JavaScript to then learn Lua and GLua. We have a forum to talk to fellow community members and discuss. Donations don't give much of a benefit saying you support us, hence the word "donation" you may donate for a heart next to your name and pet flags. We want to be a community full of good people who only want to do one thing, roleplay.

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Our Half-Life 2 roleplay server is serious. To play on our server you must know what the term "Play to loose" is. We expect you to use /mes use serious names/descriptions and build story on your character, give your character emotion. We use OOC applications for MPF & CWU on our forums. In this canon we bring you to the year 2016 when the combine take over. You are in City 17 on the map "rp_industrial17_v1". We have multiple standard divisions that we need help building up such as union, helix, and etc. Only few will be chosen to join the rebels a small portion of people to prevent "lolwebuls" from joining, these people I trust. Vortigaunts is also something that you can apply for. These creatures are something you might not see as often.

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Website: http://xenocle.site.nfoservers.com/​

IP Address: xenocle.game.nfoservers.com:27015​

 

Okay, here we go.

1. the grammar is broken in several places

2. the images are too large for the post

3. the post gives little to no info about the community or server.

 

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Plus, from what I see, you have basically every server's content ever.

 

I have to be honest with you guys. I didn't mean to hit the post button I wanted to preview sorry I am fixing the post as fast as I can.
[member=4801]Sir Trolled[/member] [member=6002]The Dovahneer[/member]

 

Take your time, no one is pressuring you.

It looks better than most of these advertizements, and you're not even finished.

 

Yeah, what Lev said.

You really should hire more staff, though. Get some guys you trust from other communities, maybe?

 

Good post so far - hope to see it finished. Hopefully you get some players, too.

 

Okay, this thread IMHO needs a bit more detail added to it.

It looks pretty good right now with your images being properly sized, just is a bit short.

I might try this out in the future.

 

Images are now all broken. You may want to find a different site.

 

Looks normal to me.

 

Weird, I can't see any of them? Anyone else getting this?

EDIT: OpenDNS blocks it, I should switch to Google DNS.

 

"play to loose" lol

 

My only criticism of this so far would be the intro.

Prolly the most redundant intro ever.

Good headers.+

 

Is hands down the most generic grabber I have ever seen in a community thread.

 

Mitch we should group up and make a TV show solely based off of trashing CW HL2RP servers

 

*guitar riff*
"I'm Mitch Connors. And this is my critics column.
I work here with my old man, Dub, and my son Big Fixx.
Every server on Clockwork has a story, and a rating.
One thing I've learned after 21 years,
You never know hwhat is gonna post on the forums."

 

"A wrench in the Clockworks" with Dub, Mitch and Sixx.
Like the Jeremy Kyle (or Jerry Springer if you're one of those) for Roleplay

 

I do that shit every day.

It's really easy to trash public HL2RP servers because the administration teams are fucking kids most of the time.

I go to the owner, he's/she's either a shit or is never online. Voice criticism, owner does jack shit and/or is never active.

 

I need to fix this for you. I'd also use bullet points too. But I can hardly be bothered to edit that.




Anyway, that intro is rather generic in style. It may be different in its own right, but it's not really something that a few of us here are looking for. It's usually safer to leave out hidden promises and let people figure it out for themselves. Kudos for your optimism, though!

Personally, there isn't much here that I personally can pick up on, You kept it short and told us the basic outlines of things most of us want to know, and gave us the links so we can find more information ourselves.

If I was still into HL2RP, I'd give it a play. Nice work on the headers and such too, they're not hogging my screen or look ugly as shit.

Good luck to you.